amateur manga- warning: violence and foul linguage

[Slacker]

hi everybody!
here's some manga i ve been fooling arownd with lately .. i know it s swort of lame even for amateur manga but it s a start and i m getting better and better at it:

http://img74.imageshack.us/img74/3240/mymanga0001a4pi.th.jpg (http://img74.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mymanga0001a4pi.jpg)http://img227.imageshack.us/img227/9859/mymangax00035hf.th.jpg (http://img227.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mymangax00035hf.jpg)http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/2121/mymanga30jb.th.jpg (http://img60.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mymanga30jb.jpg)http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/4807/mymanga4a7bs.th.jpg (http://img382.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mymanga4a7bs.jpg)

these are not the first pages ... i m working on those and i ll post them as soon as i finish them

i know they varry in composure but the first three are older...

the waitress chick is suposed to be Mahiro something (need japanese family name pls) and she s the main charater....

comments welcomed -->be ruthless:devil:

i also have some separate picks of some characters but i don t have time to post them now...

[Dregs]

I don't know if its me and my technical stupidity, but these pics are really small and indistinct. I'll give you some positive rep for the fact you are now contributing new material rather than just adding comments to threads almost three years old.

Dregs

[Tenaka]

(try clicking on them Dregs)

[Dregs]

(try clicking on them Dregs)
I'm clicking, and they're still small.

[Tenaka]

Weird, when i click on them it goes to imageshack and opens up the big images.

[Tenaka]

Not the right place to post that message digeon.

That would have been better off in a PM rather than hijacking this guys thread.

[Slacker]

i don t understand ... how could the thumbnails not load? ! ? ... so, you re saying that imageshack doesn t open? ...strange ... i don t have any trouble accesing the picture ... tell me how to post large images .. when i upload the image should i chose "thumbnails for websites", "show image to friends" , or "direct link to image" ?


anyway here are some more ....thumbnails


http://img60.imageshack.us/img60/4607/lltakeyourbestshot9st.th.jpg (http://img60.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lltakeyourbestshot9st.jpg)http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/5105/reiwearingrelllygayclothes3wv.th.jpg (http://img58.imageshack.us/my.php?image=reiwearingrelllygayclothes3wv.jpg)http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/5152/sk8ergirlmahiro2jw.th.jpg (http://img522.imageshack.us/my.php?image=sk8ergirlmahiro2jw.jpg)
http://img58.imageshack.us/img58/5502/bigasssword2fs.th.jpg (http://img58.imageshack.us/my.php?image=bigasssword2fs.jpg)http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/8684/coolsamurai00051he.th.jpg (http://img522.imageshack.us/my.php?image=coolsamurai00051he.jpg)http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/544/demonslayer3le.th.jpg[URL=http://img151.imageshack.us/my.php?image=puppyyy00018ef.jpg]http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/7280/puppyyy00018ef.th.jpg (http://img522.imageshack.us/my.php?image=demonslayer3le.jpg)

http://img47.imageshack.us/img47/9831/grrrrrrr019cp.th.jpg (http://img47.imageshack.us/my.php?image=grrrrrrr019cp.jpg)

[Tamuril]

Good stuff. Very manga poses.

[Slacker]

thanks tamuril ! i m thinking of checking out your entire thread but that should take about 97 years (30 pages wow) anyway i ll see it after i get back from school - i have this whole school photos session that i can t miss *sigh*...

i have another pic that didn t fit into the last post ..i ll put it on the thread after i come from school ...

here it is ...core wa cute little puppy : http://img373.imageshack.us/img373/8290/puppyyy00029ri.th.jpg (http://img373.imageshack.us/my.php?image=puppyyy00029ri.jpg)

[Slacker]

here's s'more ^_^ :

http://img456.imageshack.us/img456/7359/mymanga4a6ao.th.jpg (http://img456.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mymanga4a6ao.jpg) http://img234.imageshack.us/img234/756/mymanga5a9vz.th.jpg (http://img234.imageshack.us/my.php?image=mymanga5a9vz.jpg)

[Shintaro]

The art is great; you've got some definite talent. But if you're planning on making a full comic or just a small story, you have to work on the dialogue. I didn't get it at sometimes.

[Slacker]

thanks shintaro! well the dialogue goes kinda like this : loud mouth gang leader starts complaining at the table ... mahiro is busy with other orders and gets angerd; she comes to his table and explains some rules of the diner but the guy gets even more upset. then he makes some rude remarks on her behalf and it s then when she flips off and breaks the plate she s carrying in his head .. the end for now ... i m gonna update it as many times as i can but now i m kinda busy with school and all
the scenario is part of my manga project but that s all i made so far

this is an art trade i made for another member:

http://img95.imageshack.us/img95/2718/alladin00020nm.th.jpg (http://img95.imageshack.us/my.php?image=alladin00020nm.jpg)