A story

[Allein'd'Ashan]

I am writing a book(i wish), and i have completed som chapters. i just want to hear other opinions besides my friends, so here you go. i will post a chapter once a week. you will have to paste and copy into a word document

Mordero Daghain pas Duente Cuebiyari

[Allein'd'Ashan]

here are chapter 1