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Madeleine
14th May 2003, 12:44
I've been dying to do some water-color lately, so I've sketched up a picture of Rand's "three-some". Just wanted to check with you guys if I'm close to how you see the characters :).

http://aviana.csbnet.se/~maddie/galleries/minaviely2.jpg

Anita_Blake
14th May 2003, 13:25
wow, those are great! Very well done, IMO. :D

epiph
14th May 2003, 14:47
very nice!!

Jacob
14th May 2003, 15:41
Your picture of Elayne if probably the one of the characters which is closest to my mental image. These images are of course helped by the different artworks that I've seen. I imagine Min with a rounder face. For instance like Christina E. Bronnestam's (http://www.wotism.net/artgallery/Christina-E-Bronnestam/min) image of Min, which is one of my absolute favorits. Though since she's been growing her hair longer in the last few books, the hair length in your picture is more up-to-date. Aviendha is beautifully drawn but I would imagine her looking abit fiercer. Or well, maybe that's not the right word, but she does look abit "wetlander soft" in this image, I think. Her facial expression looks mild, but perhaps more than that it may be the way she's holding her hand. Then again, she's been complaining lately that she's growing soft ;)

Madeleine
14th May 2003, 16:38
Allright :). Tried to make Avi a little harder (but she's among good friends here, so I do want her looking friendly ;) ) and made Min rounder. Remembered that I've always seen her with apple-cheeks, too, so that is added.

http://aviana.csbnet.se/~maddie/galleries/minaviely4.jpg

Jacob
14th May 2003, 17:10
Yes, Much better. Especially with Min. Not the least with her eyes and her mouth. She's an easygoing character and I think that comes through with the changes. She also looks more "alive" if you know what I mean...or not. Aviendha is better too. One thing I just though about is Aviendha's hight - Aviendha and Elayne is supposed to be about the same hight, aren't they? But that would be abit hard to change I would think. I guess Elayne and Min are just standing one step futher down a stair or such. Hmm...makes me think of some old portrait of Ulrika Elionora and her consort (my history knowlege slipping I'm afraid) where Ulrika Elionora portraied as standing one step higher up then her husband because she's Queen and he's just her prince consort. But I'm drifting from the subject as usual for me :)

Madeleine
14th May 2003, 17:19
Really?! I always thought Avi as taller, since she's aiel... Anyhow, I don't want to mess with the balance of the pic, so I guess Aviendha's standing one step higher ;).

Further update, after several tries with Min's right arm and hand.

http://aviana.csbnet.se/~maddie/galleries/minaviely5.jpg

Jacob
14th May 2003, 17:33
Yea, I think they're supposed to be about the same hight. Andoran's are tall and blond, rather Aiel looking? I'm getting rather sleepy now though ~yawn~

I've sent you an email btw. Gah at clicking "no" on "Recieve PMs":rolleyes:

Madeleine
14th May 2003, 17:36
Allright ^_^. Godnatt!

satan
14th May 2003, 22:50
very nice *claps* i love them all. elayne is very near to what i imagined as is min.. finally someone drew the proper hear ;) although the first one is closer to what i imagined.. they are all very wonderful :D

another amazing artist on wotism :)

Jennifer
15th May 2003, 00:01
Madeleine, your art is wonderful! Welcome to wotism! Anyways, I agree with Jacob in that they look very much as I imagined them. Maybe Elayne's neckline should be higher, since Andoran gowns usually have high necks. But hey, she's been a little racy lately, right? Maybe she'll start a new fashion trend in Andor! ;)

Madeleine
15th May 2003, 07:42
Thanks! (LOVE your avatar, Amaia -- one darn cute cat with a darn cute expression.) Yes, I know Andoran gowns are highnecked, but that takes away my pleasure drawing jewlery on bare skin ;).
Today, I also read a line in CoT that told in some roundabouts that Avi is taller than Elayne, but presumably not much. "Birgitte was not a big woman, though she stood taller than Elayne in her heeled boots, as tall as Aviendha..." TOR-books,p288, second newline.
One, two inches, perhaps?

Madeleine
15th May 2003, 14:43
Going further...

http://aviana.csbnet.se/~maddie/galleries/3.jpg

TRUTH
15th May 2003, 16:06
~bows in awe to the artist~

Madeleine,

This is wonderful. You are gifted. I look forward to more of your postings.


P.S. I'm touring your galleries right now and they are tremendous as well!

:D

epiph
15th May 2003, 17:50
if we're posting what we'd change... ;)

i imagine min's chin as being slightly less defined, less square and more pointy. and i sort of imagined avi's face as narrower...

Fencing Fool
15th May 2003, 18:14
Wow, this is great stuff. The only change I would make is that Elayne's hair is a lot less red than that. It's only supposed to be a hint. Other than that, :eek:

*eagerly awaits more*

satan
15th May 2003, 20:46
i don't know what you're seeing.. that is only a hint of red.. phreak

epiph
16th May 2003, 03:40
oh...this is kind of picky...but in heraldic terms, you should have gold/yellow on white/silver. it's a metal on a metal, and it's not done. it should either be a gold or silver lion on a field of red. but that's just in terms of heraldry and coats of arms and stuff.

Madeleine
16th May 2003, 11:07
...drat. So you mean a gold lion on white isn't done? (Starts to hate watercolor.)

I don't want her dress too red... I'll have to check it out in the comp, and see if it looks terrible with red bodice. Otherwise, I may be able to fix it. *Blood and ashes!*

epiph
16th May 2003, 14:43
well, you could make the lion red...

Madeleine
19th May 2003, 09:00
I might do that, epiph, thanks.
And I'll rework Min again. She's not Min to me either, yet.

And if anyone has questions to me, post them here! That'll be better than in the threads of discussions ^_^.

Elin
19th May 2003, 18:51
Cool... I almost never check the art discussion, or the galleries either, but Jacob told me I should. It's a great picture, I like it a lot. If I have to criticize it, what comes to mind is that the faces look a little too similar (this got better after you changed Min, and Aviendha too). It's like, when you draw, you learn to draw a mouth, but then it's easy for most mouths to turn out the same. (OTOH, maybe that's what's called developing a style.) And it's difficult to make people beautiful, but in different ways...

Hmm, what more? I like the way the folds fall on the clothes, it's nicely done... And the watercolor version as well - very nice.

PS Jag bor också i Göteborg... :)

Madeleine
19th May 2003, 19:01
Moving further... More Min, now? She's more what I had imagined, but I have never seen her from this angle, or this clear, when reading the books.

http://aviana.csbnet.se/~maddie/galleries/minaviely7.jpg

epiph
19th May 2003, 22:40
definately more min now! right on!

satan
20th May 2003, 21:02
yes! thats it.. your awsome

lianedefeyer
21st May 2003, 02:40
I very like the way Min and Aviendha look :)
the three fit very with the descrpition.... how will you work on it? watercolour , as you did? or photoshop skill? or a mix ? :)

*asks questions, asks questions , asks questions*

I like babbling on art :D sorry, but for once I can discuss with a fellow artist, and this is damn cool :)

Madeleine
21st May 2003, 06:23
*hehe*

I really like your "Hercules"-styled character-drawings, and the clothes are so awesome!

Now, I think I'll do both one water-color and one computer-colored drawing of this one. I'll add som objects in the back- and foreground before it's finished ^_^.

Perhaps I'll do some kind of series with these... Anyone have "requests" on which persons they would like to se fit together like this? 2/3 maximum 4.

lianedefeyer
21st May 2003, 06:42
thanks Madeleine :) yours are very good too , the way you change you way of drawing :) did you get an atristic foramtion?

form my part 3 drawings are work in progress . this is a pity that for now my free time is.. well inexistant !! Mashin shin is almost finished , but I don't have time.. damn it :rolleyes: I'll have tro work by night :rolleyes:

well Ican't wait to see how you'll manage it :)

Madeleine
21st May 2003, 10:15
I had some art-classes at high-school, if that's what you wondered. The past four years I've learned on my own, especially from looking at other artist's art.

Yeah, you better get to finishing some of your drawings! You hold us in suspense for the longest time o_O! I heard something of a new Mat in great clothing f.ex...^_^

Karistina
21st May 2003, 11:13
Originally posted by epiph
well, you could make the lion red...

But it's the White Lion of Andor!

Madeleine
21st May 2003, 11:27
Allright, I'm going to start it over ^_^. White lion and red roses :)

Madeleine
21st May 2003, 16:19
Starting from the beginning just made me realise that I should make my sketch better. I did a make-over on Elayne, and don't worry, the other girls will get one too. They look pretty awful compared.

More "queenish", now, perhaps? More WoT-bitchy, looking-down-nose, at least :rolleyes:

http://aviana.csbnet.se/~maddie/minaviely8.jpg

Byrn
21st May 2003, 17:05
Yes, I think the word you're looking for is "haughty". Very "Elayne". Could I suggest Min's hair to have a few more curls?

Madeleine
21st May 2003, 17:28
Of course you could. More curls, you say ^_^

And haughty -- yes :)

epiph
21st May 2003, 17:37
that. rocks.

oh, and i was just thinking...if min can pass easily for a boy...maybe she should be a tad less busty?

Madeleine
21st May 2003, 18:01
Thank god for you people! Of course! It fealt really wrong making her that busty, but I didn't want her to feel inferior to Avi and Ely ;). Now I have proof! Haha! *shows proof to Min*

*ghaa* I'm tired, sorry guys *can't help but laugh*

Brandon
22nd May 2003, 04:41
I was waiting til i made it to the end to say anything. I'm quite impressed. By the last posting you created the perfect picture of Elayne in my mind. I'm eagerly awaiting the next revision. Astounding is the only word that comes to mind. Submit your work to RJ. Maybe we'll finally see cover art worthy of tWoT.

Jennifer
22nd May 2003, 11:35
Madeleine -
I really like the new Elayne. Your other drawings were wonderful, but I like the idea of giving them more "personality," rather than just generalised portraits. Maybe Min should have more of a mischeivous look, like a smirk. I can't think of anything for Avi right now. Anyhow, your art is wonderful and will come out great no matter what. ;)

WFFS
25th May 2003, 03:45
WOAH!

Only just saw this thread....
Kudos to you Madeleine :)
Yes.... I :love: it!

Madeleine
6th June 2003, 18:19
I have way too much to do nowadays, but I've found a few seconds to work on the pic. Just a new Avi, so far. Rights and wrongs with her? This versus the former Avi?

http://aviana.csbnet.se/~maddie/galleries/minaviely8.jpg

LaughingTurtle
6th June 2003, 18:29
Woah...pure and simple...definite improvement with the tilt rather than straight on.

:)

Amelia Sedai
6th June 2003, 18:41
WOW!!! Youre brilliant! I pictured Min exactly like that, except for the cleavage! lol!

I always pictured Avi with longer hair, but I guess not since she had short hair when we were introduced to her.

Elayne is great, I really didnt have a clear picture in my head about her. The nose in the air is perfect! The way Mat always says she is!!! lol

Madeleine
6th June 2003, 18:57
Thank you! Min will be reworked to a more realistic figure and face later on, but I'll try to get her characteristics in anyway :).

epiph
7th June 2003, 12:46
i reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeally like the new avi!!

satan
7th June 2003, 17:04
absolutly wonderful!

Jacob
7th June 2003, 18:42
I'm not a very good critic I'm afraid so I can do little more than say that I like the changes you've made with Aviendha. Hmm...one thing, she's supposed to always were that Kandori Snowflake pattern necklace. I don't know exactly how that's supposed to look like, but it's a necklace... :)

Madeleine
9th June 2003, 17:41
Thanks Epiph, satan and Jacob ^_^.

Hmm...one thing, she's supposed to always were that Kandori Snowflake pattern necklace.

Yep, I know. It was there right before I saved it, but I didn't like the way it came out and will try again next time I work on the pic ^_^.
I've always seen it as a bunch of snowflakes, not one like the other, in one row only. Nothing fancy, but about half an inch across.

Sajhe
10th June 2003, 14:09
i realy like all of your pictures, your realy briliant, actualy my favourite artist, but Elayne should have curls i think.. else way she has a very Elaynish look :)

Madeleine
11th June 2003, 06:09
Does the books say that Elayne have curls, or is it a personal perception? Waves, perhaps, I would have imagined. Waves that slowly turn to curls at the end of her hair, even. But not curls. Anyone wish to prove me wrong before I go and look it up? :)

Forgot to tell you a thank you, Sajhe -- I'm very honored!

Sajhe
11th June 2003, 15:38
yeah, actualy, it says that her hair is curly, all the times avi brush her hair they comment it.. i think..

Nemisis
11th June 2003, 20:15
I think its not described as waves or curls, but terraces?

btw Madeleine, excellent work on this piece so far :)

Cassyndra
12th June 2003, 16:19
eeeeep! Very pretty! I like the way you redid Aviendha. She looks younger than the first time, like I always imagined her. Elayne...perfect...and Min....wow....

Someone said earlyer that you should submit your work to RJ? I think so too! Like they said, lets get some GOOD art on these covers!

Madeleine
19th June 2003, 17:30
This is as close as I can imagine "terraces" :).

http://aviana.csbnet.se/~maddie/ely.jpg

Was this what you all were looking for?

Nemisis
20th June 2003, 01:26
Thats exactly how I imagined it Madeleine. You hit the nail square on the head =)

Excellent work! :)

Sajhe
20th June 2003, 06:47
yeah! its perfect.. .. Perfect.!

Anita_Blake
20th June 2003, 10:43
whoa, i really really like the improvements you've done on this picture.... i can't wait to see more!

*wanders off without making demands for shorter hair on min* ;)

Madeleine
22nd June 2003, 15:00
Update. Min's a tough one to get down, but I'll get to her soon. Shorter hair might happen ^_^. And more curly, of course.

http://aviana.csbnet.se/~maddie/aviely.jpg

Jacob
22nd June 2003, 15:19
I'm almost feeling abit guilty for saying this but...these new versions you've done is making the original one look bad :eek:
Really, this is by far the best WOT inspired art I've seen from you. That dress for Elayne is magnificent, I must say. Perhaps you should be on your way towards becomming a fashion designer instead of a computer...errr...engeneer?

Hmm...ever present belt knife for Aviendha? Or would she wear that on her left hip?

If I order a print of this one when it's done, I'll get it signed, right? :)

(edit) Oh yea....

You said something earlier about suggestions for other series like this with two or three characters in it: Gaul, Chiad and Bain perhaps? (/edit)

Madeleine
22nd June 2003, 15:39
*lol* No kidding?! I'm quite stunned when I think the original was good, too. It's awful! Yikes... did I do that?

And every print ordered is signed -- of course!

Edit: Ah, the three-some Aiel ;). Yes, that might happen ^_^.

So far, I'm thinking

Rand, on his own
Perrin and Faile
Mat and Tuon, and perhaps... damn, what's her name...
drat.

Egwene, maybe with Gawyn
Who Galad gets is yet to see
Moiraine with Thom, if RJ ever gets his pen out and sets her free ;)

Jennifer
22nd June 2003, 16:03
Galad and Berelaine? The most beautiful man paired with the most beautiful women would be a sure pleaser.

Mat and Tuon, and perhaps... damn, what's her name...

Perhaps you're thinking of Tylin?

Your artwork is truly wonderful Madeleine. I can sketch animals and such, but not people. It's a talent I really wish I had. ;)

Madeleine
22nd June 2003, 16:30
Yeah, I'm also guessing that the man in white will be head over heels with that... Berelaine... , but who knows what JR does. :confused:

And no, not Tylin, but Tuon's sohjin(sp?). A... something? Watching over them both... well, it's something way in the future, perhaps it'll change after the next one in the series.

epiph
22nd June 2003, 18:09
this just keeps getting better and better...

avi now reminds me of someone i know...but i can't think who...

Madeleine
23rd June 2003, 09:50
Tried yet again a new look on Aviendha. Which one do you like the best? Further changes?

http://aviana.csbnet.se/~maddie/galleries/avi.jpg

Sajhe
23rd June 2003, 10:04
this is REALY great, and better than the last one.. please draw more.!! faaaster :D

Dingdin
23rd June 2003, 16:46
Avi getting even better ...

Well, I think you should do some art with both good guys and bad guys together. Not like a stupid sci fi epic movie poster like Star Wars or Dune, but with some kind of real enmity. Maybe showing through a smile... (tall order innit?)

Tuon Selucia Anath

Taim Rand Narishma

Cyndane and Lanfear (who said it should be possible just imagine their mutual hate ;) )

Perrin and Berelain (not Faile)

Rand Nynaeve with Choedan Kal in action

As you probably gathered I like suspense or conflict in the pictures... a character is more than just looks. Like your Selene 3/4 profile head, where you can feel the evil... You know we love that one.

Madeleine
23rd June 2003, 18:07
I can definately imagine your choices of characters together (I think we can all feel the conflicts and suspension just hearing their names one after another). Very nice, you got my fingers itching ;). I guess I'll be making a whole lot of this series, because I do want to draw them all :shattered.

epiph
23rd June 2003, 22:39
i think i like avi more the previous way.

satan
24th June 2003, 15:38
me too

Sajhe
25th June 2003, 06:32
nooooo!! new avi!! NEEW! she got sparkling eyes XD

Madeleine
25th June 2003, 08:01
*lol* Perhaps I can find a new Avi between the two? I promise to give her sparkling eyes ;).

Sajhe
25th June 2003, 08:07
yaaay :D
and one thing you HAVE to make Min REALY cute. i dont care about the hair,just make her cute :P

epiph
25th June 2003, 11:24
the reason i like the other one better is that in the new one, her face just looks stretched...so it doesn't look quite normal...

Madeleine
25th June 2003, 16:50
Yes, I know (Unfortunately, I stare myself blind on a picture when working with it for too long, that's why I take so long time to finish a picture. I need to look at it with new eyes now and then.)

I've fixed her way to wide apart eyes in the next version, but I'll see if I can get some of the older avi into it :)

Sajhe
26th June 2003, 05:12
and Min!

Madeleine
29th June 2003, 07:12
*hehe* Got it, Sajhe ;)

Sajhe
3rd July 2003, 09:55
draw faster! :P

i whanna see new stuff you made!! :grumbles:

satan
3rd July 2003, 13:13
hmm impatient are we?

Sajhe
3rd July 2003, 14:52
NO SHIT?

Madeleine
6th July 2003, 17:09
Originally posted by Sajhe
NO SHIT?

I've been busy lately, Sajhe -- haven't been able to work on the pic. I'll get too it as soon as I can! :D

Sajhe
7th July 2003, 01:54
*Cries forever*

dustSpek
9th July 2003, 08:49
hey Madeleine...very nice pic...thats exactly how i immagined elayne...this is the best picture of any of them ive seen...

...a bit late for this idea, but on the note of other ideas of groups of people...Egwene, Siuan, and Elaida?...just a thot...

MarkHeron
16th July 2003, 03:02
Not wanting to be mean or critical or anything, but I kind of like the original Aviendha, but with a little bit longer face. But great stuff, I kind of like to draw once in a while, but your art excedes anything I've ever aspired to do? Also, if there was gonna be a movie or miniseries on WoT, does anyone else agree Natasha Henstridge would make a good Aviendha, she's tall (like 5'10'', don't know if that's tall enough), stern, and best of she's Canadian. Sorry, I just really love fellow country girls.:D

Saaren Mroak
16th July 2003, 09:01
the Aviendha before last I think was really great, but if I may make a suggestion, Elyane is wonderful!!!

Heathen
16th July 2003, 10:00
Madeleine your work is great. I just looked through all the pics and I'm very impressed. :D

Looking forward to Rand, Matt, Perrin etc.

Keep up the great work.

Sajhe
20th July 2003, 05:55
*i am still crying!*

Madeleine
24th July 2003, 22:03
I'm sorry Sajhe! I'm working 10 hours a day on a "regular" job right now, to get some real money, and when I'm not working, I'm moving, so it's all a mess. I prolly won't be able to draw something real again before August 27, when I begin another one and a half years of studying (to get a Master in comp-game designing :D ). Then I'll finish it! Promise!

Sajhe
25th July 2003, 09:37
but.. thats a moth from now :(... its okay if i can be your Beta tester for those cool games im sure you will make :)

Arianna Sedai
3rd August 2003, 19:12
im not sure how it would work, but i'd always pictured avi with tougher skin, as she was a maiden of the spear...like caloused or something? may not look good, but would be truer to character...other then that, i think she's coming along beautifully. :D

Solmyre
6th August 2003, 11:46
holy shit, i think i'm a changed man after seeing those... wow... i'm speachless... I agree with Sajhe--do it NOW!

you're absolutely amazing...!

Rockworm
28th December 2003, 02:16
and here i am unable to see these pictures i know im a bit late with this but i just found out about this site love the books and then i find this thread of a picture of the my 3 favorite girls i click on it and nothing it wont show up for some reason anyone else have this problem i would love to see this picture it just doesnt show.

Rockworm
28th December 2003, 02:16
and here i am unable to see these pictures i know im a bit late with this but i just found out about this site love the books and then i find this thread of a picture of the my 3 favorite girls i click on it and nothing it wont show up for some reason anyone else have this problem i would love to see this picture it just doesnt show.

Jean
28th December 2003, 02:29
Think the pictures have been moved, but you can take a look at Madeliene's gallery here at wotism by going here: http://www.wotism.net/art/Madeleine-Gusdal

Rockworm
28th December 2003, 13:23
Wow your art is simply Beautiful no other word can describe it. And it has inspired me to continue on the story that ive been writing but havent really gotten down to it

Jacob
28th December 2003, 17:41
Hmm....yea, the links are outdated as she's gotten a propper domain for her site. I don't wan't to hotlink those pictures without her permission and neither can I of course upload the pictures to the forum so you'll just have to go to her site to see this picture.

Go to www.elverquisst.se or head strait for the picture at http://www.elverquisst.se/galleries/doodles/minaviely8.html
That's the latest and only available incarnation of the picture. It is very good though. I want it finished because already it surpasses the finished pictures that are featured in her gallery here on wotism.net

Rockworm
28th December 2003, 18:30
amazing simply amazing your my favorite artist in fact you made me interested in art. I especially loved your self portrait holding the stars. Madeleine keep up the good word and youve got a fan.

Madeleine
15th January 2004, 10:31
Whops, sorry 'bout that. I had completely forgot about them -- I'll upload them again so they'll show in the thread ^_^. (And my homepage is dreadfully outdated... *sigh*)

Madeleine
15th January 2004, 13:30
I just added a couple of the latest pictures, as I don't want the thread to get too heavy. Now, I think I'll go draw some more on the girls...

Raunch
4th March 2004, 21:25
Those are very well done. I have to agree with Jacob. The picture of Elayne is great. It gives her the feel of looking down her nose at you (as Mat would say). I think Aviendha looks a bit too much like brooke shields, but it is still an awesome picture.

The Melvinator
5th March 2004, 21:17
Wow!!! they all look a lot like i pictured them, especially min. the one problem is elayne's hair. I have a friend w/gorgeous ultra curly hair and i always pictured elayne like that-curls not waves.