baxts
23rd January 2003, 01:54
hey yall, i've never put any of my poems up for public show before, so dunno what yall will think, but thought i'd put one of mine up. i only write during times of strong emotion, so they're kinda stressed out, but i'd be curious to see what you think,
"Weep"
I do not weep,
I do not cry,
My heart is stone,
I care not to try.
No one understands,
Few really care,
Just what I feel inside,
What is truly there.
The deepest pit, the darkest hole
Under a broken lee,
And what‘s verily there,
Not even I can see.
I know no-one can help,
No-ojne with human eyes,
Only god will ever see,
Because only he is truly wise.
I hide my feelings deep,
Behind a false façade,
And present to the world,
A face, that’s not as hard.
Because what would they think,
They couldn’t understand,
The inner turmoil I feel,
The struggle close at hand.
Am I that strong?
Will it ever come out??
This festering sore consuming my soul,
This damning, nagging, Self Doubt.
"Weep"
I do not weep,
I do not cry,
My heart is stone,
I care not to try.
No one understands,
Few really care,
Just what I feel inside,
What is truly there.
The deepest pit, the darkest hole
Under a broken lee,
And what‘s verily there,
Not even I can see.
I know no-one can help,
No-ojne with human eyes,
Only god will ever see,
Because only he is truly wise.
I hide my feelings deep,
Behind a false façade,
And present to the world,
A face, that’s not as hard.
Because what would they think,
They couldn’t understand,
The inner turmoil I feel,
The struggle close at hand.
Am I that strong?
Will it ever come out??
This festering sore consuming my soul,
This damning, nagging, Self Doubt.