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The Tourist
28th August 2002, 16:53
Here are some of my haiku poems. I like haiku because they're meaningful yet simple and short.

Life is like water
It starts fresh on morning grass
But evaporates

When all our lives end
What happens to memories?
Do they stay or fly?

My life is a song
Have I reached another verse
Or the same chorus?

Don’t play the lotto!
Luck is a loser’s ally!
Win your life alone!

Nature is greedy
Even loyal dogs don’t care
They fight for themselves

wendy
29th August 2002, 00:57
cool, haiku is fun, you have some good ones there. I'll try my hand.


a single smug smile
reminds me now and ever
why I love your eyes

deadline's tommorrow
procrastinating today
bugger bugger bum!


:D

The Tourist
29th August 2002, 13:39
I used to think "procrastinating" was a sexual word or something relating to bodily fluids.

wendy
29th August 2002, 22:51
LOL, um I guess its a fair misunderstanding to make. I hope your straight on the meaning now because I don't want my haiku to seem rude :blush:

The Tourist
30th August 2002, 13:14
lol yeah, I once heard Sabrina the Teenage Witch say it, so I started to wonder if it really meant what I thought it meant, so I got a dictionary to find out. I was actually quite disappointed to find the real meaning.