The Dark

[chronodmin]

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[Mike]

That is very good stuff, chronodmin. Geez, I like it!

That poem raises a million questions, and answers just about none...


Umm, do you have more?
~wonders if No will be acceptable~

[Arawis]

(in english accent) WELL Job done

[chronodmin]

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[wendy]

LOL I really like that. poor spine :umm:

[The Tourist]

That's good poetry. "The Dark" really does give a good sense of darkness - almost a Matrixy kind of dark sorta.

[chronodmin]

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[wendy]

LOL know the feeling, and then there is the opposite when you have nothing to do.


sitting in this office
is terribly inspiring
I must become a poet
for fear of boredom dying


I scribbled this and left it on my desk once and the office manager found it! He wasn't annoyed, but he wasn't amused either.

[The Tourist]

Chron's poem sounded like an office worker on speed.

[nightfairy]

hehe, caffeine & frustration, more likely. ;)

[The Tourist]

Or just an everyday office worker I guess.

[chronodmin]

I am not an everyday office worker.. i am an undervalued worker

the copy machine @ the architecture firm i work at is higher on the corprate ladder then i am


damn copy machine i'll show it .. i'll hide the paper and ink from it

[Arawis]

who took my stapler?
where my tape?
what copiers broken...ack!

those lines remind me of 'Office Space'
atleast....i think it was on office space where th guy hoarded all the office supplies...maybe im thinking of that movie with lisa kudrow in it where shes a temp....

but definitely the copier one cuz that one guy hates the printer/copier i forget which it is cuz it never works for him and then they take it out in a feild and smach it... :p jajaja that movie is HI-larious

[nightfairy]

THAT movie is Office Space, great great movie. The other one w/Lisa Kudrow in it is Clockwatchers, which was a terrible movie but I watched the whole thing anyway... 2 hours of my life I'll never get back. :rolleyes:

[Travis]

Speaking about the dark,

I am a man who walks alone
And when I'm walking a dark road
At night or strolling through the park

When the light begins to change
I sometimes feel a little strange
A little anxious when it's dark

Fear of the dark, fear of the dark
I have constant fear that something's
always near
Fear of the dark, fear of the dark
I have a phobia that someone's
always there

[Kolo al'Jaden]

Evil will die!

[chronodmin]

Evil will die?

thats your contribuation to the the dark? evil will die?
no dark poems or essay.. just 3 words? you write a page and a half on rhymes for the battle page

~yawn~
stick to rhymes

[wendy]

shade in, shade out
I spin, I spout
I long, I linger
I laugh, I shout
in sleep, in dreams
in life, in screams
in night, in day
in work, in play

[chronodmin]

~very nice wendy.. i liked it so much i read it 3 or 4 times tonite~

[wendy]

flights of fancy linger
for the merest of a blink
kaleidoscopic chessboards
spinning in and out of sync

the rouge of harlots spreading
spreading fast across her skin
her body like an angel
....an irony of sin

sweet release please take me
to the heights! and then, I'll fall.
the seduction of a stranger
is the strongest of them all

[chronodmin]

oh my.....wendy...my virgin eyes!...~blushes~

[wendy]

LOL somehow I don't think so ;)

[chronodmin]

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[wendy]

wow, who indeed.. *shiver runs down my spine*

[Arawis]

~also shivers~

[Shadow Angel]

Death walks,
Life crawls,
The grave calls,
Breath bars our path,
Sweet sorrow to Hold,
Bliss is in death's cold,
And the light of darkness,
Is bright enough,

[WFFS]

Darkness jumps on graves
Sweeps past headstones
Runs through cemeteries
Ignores Zephyr's moans
Dances with dead trees
Follows crude paths
Creeps up on homes
Freezes birdbaths
Perverts garden gnomes
Quietens bright flowers
Awakens nightowls

Destroys light's powers

[wendy]

WFFS I read this ages ago but never commented. Its really cool, creepy actually.

[WFFS]

ty wendy :D

[nightfairy]

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[wendy]

*rasps* heh I had forgotten about his one, its soooo cool.

[mindphone]

zurich is stained =\ !